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The silence sat sobbing singing sad songs
Swiftly swiping thoughts as they sway
Said she saw something slither with sails
slowly,and as slyly as a snake or a snail
Ceiling fans face forces fastened with fears
The swift sway feeds fright to the ears
Softly the thought finally fades
Falling with freedom in several shades
Forcefully it fights a fate fueled by few
Quickly it cut the cowards in cubes
The courageous cry
and then they die too
saving the lives of people like you.


                          ~Question Everything
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Rouge-Fox Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Death is inevitable but uncertain, it always comes around, interesting metaphor with the ceiling fan, well done indeed.
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9QuestionEverything6 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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trailwolf Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Interesting, comparing a scythe to a ceiling fan, I never thought about it like that before. Overall a nice piece of work.
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9QuestionEverything6 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much.
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trailwolf Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are most welcome!!
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pctomgirl Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*claps* good job! I really like it
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9QuestionEverything6 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
I appreciate that
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pctomgirl Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:)
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The9thWarrior Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
the ceiling fan represnts the scythe because it always comes back around?

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9QuestionEverything6 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yep
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